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Establishing of an airway 2 (for paramedics, doctors).
PART 2The practical part is focused on the possibility of establishing an airway, to extend the paramedic's knowledge of laryngeal masks, invasive techniques and equipment extension in ambulances (and other emergency services vehicles.?omit?)
The last queries were directed at paramedics giving fast rides to patients and diagnosis that resulted in an airway establishment.* The survey used quantitative research and interviewing techniques and consisted of an anonymous questionnaire of 22 questions.**** The data was collected during the period from February to March 2017. The research sample consisted of paramedics from South Moravia District. The sample size was 70 respondents (=70 questionnaires).** ((The aim of the research was to determine what tools are available to paramedics to secure the airway, whether it is worthwhile to expand their competencies if they have sufficient knowledge of the laryngeal mask if they have experience in securing the airways by invasive method and according to the results consider if regular training on this issue would not be needed.))*** The research shows that the South-Moravian rescuers have in all cars, identical equipment to ensure the airway, viz laryngeal masks, tools to perform tracheal intubation sets on coniopunction and tools used for coniotomy. In the research we found out that the rescuers would like to see air ducts become mandatory ambulance equipment.
Another objective was to determine whether rescuers were interested in expanding their competencies. Result: paramedics are not interested in expanding their competencies.***** In fulfilment of the third objective, it was found that paramedics do not know enough to secure the airway laryngeal mask.***** The fourth goal was to find out if doctors have more experience in invasive methods than paramedics, which was confirmed.*****
In the practical part, I compiled statistics on the most common indications and diagnoses with ensuring the airways for the years 2014, 2015 and 2016. Finally, there was a case study of a surgical airway secured by a paramedic, even though it was outside his competence. This chosen procedure led to the rescue of human life.
*these were the respondents to the survey? = The paramedics?
**it is very important that you mention whether the sample was selected randomly or was a stratified sample. You should mention any precautions you took to make the sample random and any sources of error. (In general, a random sample is far easier and produces better results than the stratified one).
***(()) this is impossible to follow; it runs A if B if C if D if E .... You must break it up into shorter, clear sentences.
****you should include a copy of the questionnaire for inspection for the university supervisor. Preferably one filled out by a respondent.
*****you should mention the numbers (not percentages) in the footnotes or, better, endnotes.
Very well written!
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