All grown up
It's Monday and I have to write a small text on certain subject. And subject of 6th March is "All grown up". It's very interesting theme for me because I have been thinking all my life that I'm an adult. But I had been wrong before there was an accident.
So, I really felt myself like an adult when I lost my dad. My mom and I were alone. It was very difficult period of life for my family, so I had to be a good child. And I was doing everything to please my mom what I could at that period when I were 10! I were studying hard. And I weren't annoying my mom, were helping her for a household.
So for last 11 years I have been an adult and doing all my best. I'm proud of my behaviour and I'm sure that my mom is proud of me too.
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All grown up
It's Monday and I have to write a small text on a certain subject. And the subject of 6th March is "All grown up". It's a very interesting theme for me because I have been thinking all my life that I'm an adult. But I was not before there was an accident.So, I really felt myself like an adult when I lost my dad. My mom and I were alone. It was a very difficult time for my family, so I had to be a good child. And I was doing everything to please my mom; everything that a ten year-old could! I was studying hard and was not annoying my mom, and was helping her with the household.
So for the past 11 years I have been an adult and doing my best. I'm proud of my behaviour and I'm sure that my mom is proud of me, too.
Very well written!
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Happens, no problem. Carry on
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ohhh, such a stupid mistake! I wrote in draft "to please", and when I put the text here, I made this mistake! :(
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to "please" instead of pleasant
Good writing :)
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