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Hi! Today I would like to tell about emotion which is known to everyone. It’s an anxiety. This is worry, discomfort, excitement before something what is important or unknown for us.
This emotion covers people in stressful situations and often expressed as some premonition. An anxiety always depends on a social relationship and loss of sensation of control.
An anxiety usually decreases when there is certainty, structured and rules. In this moment all becomes understandable and predictable, so the anxiety retreats.
But is it possible to know for sure everything and all situations which we will face in the future?
It’s important to remember all resources, knowledge and past experience what you have and could help you in the future.
Thank you for the help.
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Hi Eugenia!
This are a few corrections that would help the text to read more naturally, I highlighted what I added and crossed out what needed to be taken out. I underlined what didnt make sense to me, maybe you could explain a little bit more what you mean in this context. Hope the notes help you out!
Hi! Today I would like to tell about an emotion which is known to everyone. It’s an anxiety. This is to worry, feel discomfort or excitement before something what that is important or unknown for to us.This emotion covers affects people in stressful situations and often is expressed as some kind of premonition. An Anxiety always depends on a social relationship and loss of sensation of control. An Anxiety usually decreases when there is certainty, structured and rules. In this moment all becomes understandable and predictable, so the anxiety retreats.
But, is it possible to know for sure everything and all situations which we will face in the future? It’s important to remember all resources, knowledge and past experiences what you have had and that could help you in the future.
Thank you for the help.
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Hi! Please check my text and correct the mistakes
Hi! Today I would like to talk about an emotion which is known to everyone. It’s anxiety. This is worry, discomfort, excitement before something that is important or unknown for us.This emotion covers people in stressful situations and is often expressed as some premonition. Anxiety always depends on a social relationship and loss of sensation of control. Anxiety usually decreases when there is certainty, structure and rules. In this moment everything becomes understandable and predictable, so the anxiety retreats.
But is it possible to know for sure everything and all situations which we will face in the future? It’s important to remember all resources, knowledge and past experience that you have and could help you in the future.
Thank you for the help.
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