Women rights violation
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
I agree with the idea that universities should have no restrictions in every subject without any regards for male or female students. Unfortunately in real world every country has its own culture and traditions in some places we still have such inequality and in this essay, I will think about the effects of these social inequality events.
First of all, in some Islam undemocracy countries such as Saudi Arabian Kingdom or Iran Islam republic we still could see the situation when female even doesn’t have a right to get education in Universities.
On the other hand, some subjects have the essential restriction which makes preferences for male or female student. For example in a lot of heave industries specialization used to a lot of male, on the other hand in philology and other humanistic subjects is traditionally female preferred.
In conclusion I would like to add that equal qualities of student in every subject is the right thing but it is unreal in nowadays situation . However, I believe that in 21 century we could see the real equal rights and opportunities for male and female in every university in every country.
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Women rights violations
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.I agree with the idea that universities should have no restrictions with regards to the numbers of male and female students accepted into each subject (this idea is very different from the original sentence though as the first sentence mentions equal numbers, whereas it only mentions no restrictions here). Unfortunately, in the real world, some countries, cultures and traditions still have much inequality. In this essay, I will examine the effects of these and their impact on social inequality.
Firstly, in some undemocratic Islamic countries, such as the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia or the Islamic Republic of Iran, we can still find the situation where females do not even have the right to university education.
On the other hand, some subjects are still over-represented with respect to the numbers of male or female students. For example, many specialisations relating to heavy industry are over-represented by male students, while on the other hand in psychology and other humanity subjects, female students are over-represented.
In conclusion, I would like to state that taking in equal quantities of male and female students in every subject is the right thing, but it is not practical in the present situation . However, I believe that in the 21st century, we could see real equal rights and opportunities for male and female students in every university in every country.
Note: If you are giving a speech, it is appropriate to talk in the first person "I", however, for a written essay, the third person (impersonal) is preferred. Some of the concepts you raised appear disjointed, with no clear structure.
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