Wasted materials recycling
Nowadays,many rubbish are being created by human.The word,”Our cities will be surrounded by rubbish.”,is just not to scare people.It will come true unless we take measures to improve the situation.
Wasted materials should be recycled.Unfortunately,the fact is tot
ally opposite.Citizens don’t know how to divide wasted materials to several kinds.what’s more,some of them aren’t aware of the action above is vital to our environment.Though someone can divide wasted materials to different kinds,it will be mixed to one kind of wasted materials by garbage man.Government fail to do well in telling people the significance of recycling and the method of classifying rubbish is too complex for common people to execute.
As a popular saying,” The ways to overcome difficulties always surpass difficulties itself.” On one hand,government should try their best to tell people the significance of recycling by social media and traditional media.For example,they can deliver concept of recycling by social apps,newspapers,broadcast,television and so on.Meanwhile,teacher can teach children how to classify wasted materials so they can teach their parents.On the other hand,government should simplify the way to classify wasted materials in order to execute conveniently by citizens.For instance,if the method of recycling is classify wasted materials to 5 kinds,we can divide wasted materials to 2 main kinds now and then recycling system will subdivision them.Most of all,government should built a accountability system as fast as they can.
With the rapid development of society, problems behind it will be revealed gradually.Only we dare to face it,can we finally solve it.Both of the government and individuals should work together to tackle it and then our society can develop sustainable.
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Nowadays, much waste is being created by humans.The claim that our cities will be surrounded by rubbish is not just to frighten people. It will come true unless we take measures to improve the situation.
As the popular saying goes, 'The ways to overcome difficulties always surpass the difficulties themselves.” On one hand, the government should try their best to tell people the significance of recycling via social media and traditional media. For example, they can deliver concept of recycling through social apps, newspapers, radio, television and so on. Meanwhile, teachers can instruct children on how to classify waste materials so they can teach their parents. On the other hand, the government should simplify the way to classify waste materials so that it may be conveniently executed by its citizens. For instance, if the recycling method requires the waste materials to be sorted into five categories, it may be ignored or misunderstood by the citizenry for being too much trouble. Instead, to keep it simple and therefore more likely to be complied with, it may be better to require people to divide waste materials into two main categories and any further sorting may be performed at the recycling center. Most of all, the government should build an accountability system as fast as they can.
The problems inherent in the rapid development of society will be gradually revealed. Only if we dare to face it, can we finally solve it. Both of the government and individuals should work together to tackle it and then our society can develop sustainably.
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I have corrected some of your grammar, and some awkward phrasing. One thing to remember, after all punctuation, such as periods and commas, you must leave a space before the beginning of the next word.
Cheers,
Alexis
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