Smile and Change
Do you know what is the best gift of our life which is everyone has? Yeah, it’s “SMILE”, you might have already guessed it. We all like the person who has a smile on their faces. Do you like people who are always in a serious mood, scowl, and frown? Ask yourself. I am pretty sure that we never like that kind of person.
You might think that what should be the reason to keep smiling? Ponder and ask yourself again, there are always so many things we have in our life that make us smile. Then suddenly why we are filled with the scowl, frown, fuming, fretting and resentment after some incidents that might not take place in our life. We have five fingers in our hand but not of the same size that indicates that time is not same always. We see that day comes after night and vice versa. So, our life is full of up and down. We know it and it is the fact. If we live our life with full of tension, pensive thoughts, worry that make our life more complex. Do you know one more fact that tension blocks the flow of thoughts power, our brain can’t operate efficiently under pensive thoughts.
The best medicine in the world is “SMILE”. Keep your mind relaxed and do you work with a smile that makes us powerful, gives happiness and joy. We always want to encounter people who have a smile on their face and that makes us more perfect. It is said that if you don’t have a smile on their face, it means you are not in fully dressed so keep smiling. We always saw the children in our surrounding who always live happily. The main reason behind his happiness is ‘’smiling’’. They are not disturbed by any factors. They live in present moment and never worry about past and future. They always make others smiling. Learn from the children and live like they live. If we have a smile on our face then we can make others smile and gives pleasure to others. “Use your smile to change the world…don't let the world change your smile”.
You must be the change, You wish to see in the world. These are the words of the great “Mahatma Gandhi”. So smile and be the change.
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Smile and Change
Do you know what is the best gift of our life which is that everyone has? Yeah, it’s “SMILE”, you might have already guessed it. We all like the person people who has have a smile on their faces. Do you like people who are always in a serious mood, scowl, and frown? Ask yourself. I am pretty sure that we never like that kind of person.You might think that wonder what should be the reason to keep smiling? Ponder and ask yourself again, there are always so many things we have in our life that make us smile. Then suddenly why we are filled with the scowl, frown, fuming, fretting and resentment after some incidents that might not take place in our life. We have five fingers in our hand but not of the same size, that which indicates that time is not always the same . We see that day comes after night and vice versa. So, our life is full of ups and downs. We know it and it is the fact. If we live our life with full of tension, pensive thoughts, worry that make our life more complex. Do you know one more fact that tension blocks the flow of thoughts power, our brain can’t operate efficiently under pensive thoughts.
The best medicine in the world is “SMILE”. Keep your mind relaxed and do your work with a smile that makes us powerful, gives us happiness and joy. We always want to encounter people who have a smile on their faces and that makes us more perfect. It is said that if you don’t have a smile on their your face, it means you are not in fully dressed, so keep smiling. We always saw the children in our surrounding who always live happily. The main reason behind his happiness is ‘’smiling’’. They are not disturbed by any factors. They live in present moment and never worry about past and or future. They always make others smiling smile . Learn from the children and live like they live. If we have a smile on our face then we can make others smile and gives pleasure to others. “Use your smile to change the world…don't let the world change your smile”.
You must be the change, You wish to see in the world. These are the words of the great “Mahatma Gandhi”. So smile and be the change.
Proofread and correct it, please. I appreciate you. Best regards.
Time limited,so I just corrected some "small" mistakes for you. The essay can be better organised and some sentences can be simplified.
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