A short paragraph: What I can see through the window
When I go to the window of my bedroom I can see through it, in the distance, I can see an amazing view of the Alps mountain. Today is winter I can see the snow on the top of the mountain.
Near to me, beyond the railway, there are some wonderful kiwi trees and next to them, there are a lot of poultry singing every morning.
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A short paragraph: What I can see through the window
When I go to the window of my bedroom I can see through it, in the distance, I can see an amazing view of the Alps mountain. Today is winter I can see the snow on the top of the mountain.Near to me, beyond the railway, there are some wonderful kiwi trees and next to them, there are a lot of poultry singing every morning.
When I look out my bedroom I can see an amazing view of the Alps. Today, I can see the snow on the top of the mountain. Close by, beyond the railway line, there are some wonderful kiwi trees and next to them there are many roosters which crow every morning.
A good descriptive paragraph. What do you see when you look out the living room window?
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A short paragraph: What I can see through the window
When I go to the window of my bedroom my bedroom window, I can see through it, in the distance, I can see an amazing view of the Alps mountain. (I probably would say, when I go to my bedroom window, in the distance I can see the Alps. Or I might say, Through my bedroom window, I have an amazing view of the Alps. There are various way to say this sentence depending on what you want to emphasize - the view, the distance, the window,etc.) Today is winter, I can see the snow on the top of the mountain.Near to me, beyond the railway, there are some wonderful kiwi trees and next to them, there are a lot of poultry (like ducks/chicken?) singing every morning.
Sounds like you have a beautiful view!! Nicely done.
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