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Some thoughts about ecology I have been devoting my time to ecological issues for the whole last year. The most important experience during this year was my visit to eco community in Germany, where I got acquainted with their personnel. After interacting with them, I came to light of the many problems we may face in the future and the importance of ecological awareness. I admire the German way of considering the environment, their system of waste sorting and water conservation. Now I am really concerned with questions connected with diverse ecological issues: from fair trade to waste sorting. I try to be highest possible conscious of what I'm doing and how it can influence ecological situation at all. I never throw away waste paper and I try to use electricity less (e.g. to use small bulb instead of central bulb in my room). However, I am still not perfect at it and I just keep on educating myself. For me 'environmental sustainability' is the way people should choose to live in a harmony with nature and each other, it is a chance to save our planet from our own harmful impact and to give our descendants a possibility to live in a good, sustainable world. The impact of human on Earth is enormous and, unfortunately, it’s mostly deleterious. However, I believe that progress and technologies can not only demolish rare species and overuse depleted resources, but humanity is so developed now, that it can overcome most difficulties, in case all people would think not only about themselves and would try at least to be responsible themselves – for nature issues, poverty of less developed countries and social inequality. All in all, environmental sustainability for me means respect, straggle against poverty and injustice and living in harmony with nature and the whole humanity. I dream one day I will be a lecturer and popularizer of science. May be one of the topic I would lecture on is relationships between human and nature. As a future psychologist I am really interested in this topic as well. At my faculty I want to organize system of separate waste collection and just to be more involved in life of our local environmental society. Second, I really want to try my hand at lectureship and to spread ideas that I adhere to. Perhaps, I would learn something new this summer and I would be inspired with some ideas and my plans would be changed. I know only one thing precisely – I want to develop myself, to expand and to deepen my knowledge in this sphere.

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The impact of humans on Earth is enormous and, unfortunately, it’s mostly destructive deleterious. However, I believe that progress and technologies will can not only destroy demolish rare species and overuse depleted resources, but humanity is so developed now, that it can overcome most difficulties, as long as in case all people would think not only about themselves and would try at least to be responsible themselves – for nature environmental issues, the poverty of less developed countries and social inequality.
All in all, environmental sustainability for me means respect, a struggle against poverty and injustice and living in harmony with nature and all of the whole humanity. 
I dream that one day I will be a lecturer and popularizer of science. Maybe one of the topics I will lecture on is relationships between humans and nature. As a future psychologist I am really interested in this topic as well. 
In my faculty I want to organize a system of separate waste collection and just to be more involved in the life of our local environmental society. Second, I really want to try my hand at lecturingeship and to spread ideas that I adhere to. Perhaps, I will learn something new this summer and I will be inspired with some ideas and my plans will be changed. I know only one thing for sure precisely – I want to develop myself, to expand and to deepen my knowledge in this sphere.

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Some thoughts about ecology

I have been devoting my time to ecological issues for the whole last year. The most important experience during this year was my visit to an eco community in Germany, where I got acquainted with their personnel. After interacting with them, I came to light of understand the many problems we may face in the future and the importance of ecological awareness. I admire the German way of considering the environment, their system of waste sorting and water conservation.
Now I am really concerned with questions connected with to diverse ecological issues: from fair trade to waste sorting. I try to be highest possible as conscious as possible of what I'm doing and how it can influence the ecological situation at all. I never throw away waste paper and I try to use electricity less (e.g. to use small bulb instead of the central bulb in my room). However, I am still not perfect at it and I just keep on educating myself.
For me 'environmental sustainability' is the way people should choose to live in a harmony with nature and each other.  It is a chance to save our planet from our own harmful impact and to give our descendants a possibility to live in a good, sustainable world.
The impact of humanity on Earth is enormous and, unfortunately, it’s mostly deleterious. However, I believe that progress and technology can not only demolish rare species and overuse depleted resources, but humanity is so developed now, that it can overcome most difficulties, in case if all people would think not only about themselves and would try at least to be responsible themselves – for nature issues, poverty of less developed countries and social inequality.
All in all, environmental sustainability for me means respect, struggle against poverty and injustice and living in harmony with nature and the whole of humanity.
I dream one day I will be a lecturer and popularizer This is okay, but I don't think it's a real word.  Try "advocate." of science. May be one of the topics I would lecture on is could be relationships between humanity and nature. As a future psychologist I am really interested in this topic as well.
At my faculty I want to organize a system of separate waste collection and just to be more involved in the life of our local environmental society. Second, I really want to try my hand at lectureship and to spread ideas that I adhere to. Perhaps, I would learn something new this summer and I would be inspired with some ideas and my plans would be changed. I know only one thing precisely for certain – I want to develop myself, to expand and to deepen my knowledge in this sphere.

Interesting!  You are majoring in psychology, so how did you become interested in environmentalism and sustainability?

Very nice entry!  Lots of good high-level language, and it's used well.  You are having a little trouble with articles and prepositions, which you will need to overcome to reach a good C1 level.  Try reviewing those points for now.  Keep writing!

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Some thoughts about ecology

I have been devoted my time to ecological issues for all of the entire whole last year. The most important experience during this year was my visit to an eco community in Germany, where I got acquainted with met their staff personnel. After interacting with them, I came to realize light of the many problems we may face in the future and the importance of ecological awareness. I admire the German way of considering thinking about the environment, as well as their system of waste sorting and water conservation.
Now I am really concerned with questions connected with diverse ecological issues: from fair trade to waste sorting. I try to be as aware as possible highest possible conscious of what I'm doing and how it can influence the ecological situation at all. I never throw away waste paper and I try to use less electricity less (e.g. to I use a small bulb instead of a central bulb in my bedroom). However, I am still not perfect at it and I just keep on educating myself.
For me 'environmental sustainability' is the way people should choose to live in a harmony with nature and each other, it is a chance to save our planet from our own harmful impact and to give our descendants an opportunity possibility to live in a good, sustainable world.

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