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My family The family have mother. father. sister and I. To my mother is 50 years old. To my father is 54 years old. To my sister is 30 years old. And I'm 24 years old.

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My family

My family consists  of my  mother,my father, my sister and  me. To my mother is 50 years old ,To my father is 54 years old,To my sister is 30 years old and I'm 24 years old.


Why did you use "To"  ? There is no need to use it  and you have to use coma instead of full stop when you count more than two things.


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My family

My family is composed by my mother, my  father my sister and I. My mother is 50 years old, my father is 54 years old,  my sister is 30 years old and I'm 24 years old.
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My family

In my family there is mother, father, sister and I. My mother is 50 years old, my father is 54 years old. My sister is 30 years old and I'm 24 years old.

very well written!

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Я русская, надеюсь вы не будете против, что я чуть-чуть исправила)

My family

In my family there are mother. father. sister and me. To my mother is 50 years old. To my father is 54 years old. To my sister is 30 years old, And I'm 24 years old.
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My family

The My family have has a mother, father, sister, and me . To My mother is 50 years old, o my father is 54, To my sister is 30  and I'm 24 years old.

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