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Holiday. Hello! I had to do a writing answering an e-mail that a friend send me. The e-mail was about my friend's holiday, he wanted to come to Spain. He chose Barcelona, and I had to recommend him places he can visit. I will be very grateful if you correct my mistakes. Thanks you very much! (Maxim words - 110) "Hello Andy! How are you? You chose the best place where pass your holiday. Barcelona is my favorite city in Spain. You will never get bored because in this city you can do a lot of things every day! For example, you can start doing sightseeing visiting La Sagrada Familia, Parque Güell, La Casa Batlló, etc. If you have children, you can go to the Tibidabo, a funny theme park in a high mountain, where you can see an amazing view of Barcelona from there. Also, you can go to the beach if is summer, or go to Las Ramblas, a big street with a lot of restaurants and shops. I hope that you have got information from this e-mail. See you soon! Best wishes! Bye!"

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Holiday.

Hello! I had to do a writing answering reply to an e-mail that a friend send sent me. The e-mail was about my friend's holiday, he wanted to come to Spain. He chose Barcelona, and I had to recommend him places he can visit. I will be very grateful if you correct my mistakes. Thanks you very much! (Maxim words - 110)

"Hello Andy! How are you?
You chose the best place where pass to spend your holiday. Barcelona is my favorite city in Spain. You will never get bored because in this city you can do a lot of things every day! For example, you can start doing by sightseeing visiting La Sagrada Familia, Parque Güell, La Casa Batlló, etc. If you have children, you can go to the Tibidabo, a funny theme park in a high mountain, from where you can see an amazing view of Barcelona from there. Also, you can go to the beach if is summer, or go to Las Ramblas, a big street with a lot of restaurants and shops.

I hope that you have got information from this e-mail this information helps. See you soon!

Best wishes! Bye!"


Very well done! Keep it up

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