a Diary
Right now I'm sitting at a meeting room listening a boring speech.I just can't understand why there are so many trifles that I don't like but I have to do and I have to let them waste my lifetime .Why there are always lots of people just want me to grow in that way they want.There are so many delightful things in lifetime,and as I see,the most interesting part in life should be choose what I like,then try or feel it .
Maybe when I graduate from university, I can become more independent,there won't be Formalist things in my life.
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a Diary
Right now I'm sitting atin a meeting room listening to a boring speech.I just can't understand why there are so many triflestrifling things if you say "trifles" then you'd be talking about a multiple number of a dessert named "trifle" hehe. Also: I think a better word to use would be "mundane" that I don't like but I have to do and I have to let them waste my lifetime .Why there areare there always a lots of people justthat want me to grow in that the way they want.There are so many delightful things in lifetime, and as I see it, the most interesting part inof life should be to choose what I like, then try or feel it .Maybe when I graduate from university, I can become more independent, and there won't be formalist things in my life.
Awesome job! Almost perfect.
Just remember to use spaces after a comma and the capital F in "formalist" should've been lower case. :)
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A Diary
Right now I'm sitting at a meeting room listening to a boring speech.I just can't understand why there are so many trifles that I don't like but I have to do and I have to let them waste my lifetime .Why there are always lots of people who just want me to grow in the way they like.There are so many delightful things in lifetime,and as I see,the most interesting part in life should be that I can choose what I like,then try or feel it .Maybe when I graduate from university, I can become more independent,there won't be Formalist things in my life.
The diary is OK,but just a bit Chinglish. Hope you can do better.
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A Diary
Right now I'm sitting in a meeting room listening to a boring speech. I just can't understand why there are so many trifles that I don't like but I have to do and I have to let them waste my lifetime. Why there are always lots of people just want me to grow in that way they want.There are so many delightful things in the lifetime, and as I see, the most interesting part of life should be decided by me what I like, then try or feel it .Maybe when I graduate from university, I can be more independent, there won't be Formalist things in my life.
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