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Please, Could you correct it? Trying to describe penalties in a soccer game. Yesterday my favorite soccer team played and this match had to be finished in penalties. I will try to describe how was it to you. Corinthians, my favorite soccer team, played for Brazil Cup Championship. It had to win this match to pass to another level up. The game finished 0 to 0 and the decision was in penalties. My team missed the first one and the other team scored it, however it was best of 5 penalties for each team. It was 4 to 3 against my team. So, they could finish the game only scoring the last kick, but their player kicked the last penalty at the crossbar. Then, my team scored the next penalty and it got drawed. Agian, other team kicked it and the ball went out of the goal. Finally, my team scored the last penalty and we won the match by 5 to 4. Great, wasn´t it?

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Please, Could you correct it? Trying to describe penalties in a soccer game.

Yesterday, my favorite soccer team played. The match was  concluded through a penalty shoot-out. I will try to describe how it was to you.

Corinthians, my favorite soccer team, played in the Brazil Cup Championship. They had to win this match to progress to the next level/stage.   The game ended as a draw 0-0 and the decision was made on penalty shoot-out. My team missed the first one and the other team scored it, however it was best of five penalties for each team. It was 4 to 3 against my team. So, they could finish the game only by scoring the last kick, but their player kicked the last penalty into the crossbar. Then, my team scored the next penalty and it  was even.

Again, the other team kicked it and the ball missed the goal. Finally, my team scored the last penalty and we won the match 5 to 4.

Great, wasn´t it?

 

Sounds like an exciting match! 

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