A Monkey Which Stole a Bag of Fruits
We were sitting in a restaurant looking around. A girl was walking along the street carrying a bag with fruits purchased in the restaurant. I noticed that monkey silently walked behind the girl. At some moment monkey grabbed the bag and rushed to opposite side of the road. It started to eat the fruits while other monkey was watching it, but they were scared to got down from the cable of electric pole. The reason of that was simple: it was a male monkey.
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A Monkey Which Stole a Bag of Fruits
We were sitting in a restaurant looking around. A girl was walking along the street carrying a bag with fruits purchased in the restaurant. I noticed a monkey walking silently behind her. Then the monkey grabbed the bag and rushed across the road. It started to eat the fruits while the other monkeys watched it, but they were too scared to climb down the pole carrying the electric cable. The reason for that was simple: it was a male monkey.Thank you in advance.
very well written!
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Thank you very much for all of the comments and corrections.
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"We were sitting in a restaurant looking around. A girl was walking along the street carrying a bag of fruits purchased from the restaurant. I noticed a monkey walked silently behind the girl. All of a sudden the monkey grabbed the bag and rushed to the opposite side of the road. Then it started to eat the fruits while the other monkeys were just watching it because they were too scared to get down from the cable of electric pole. The reason for that was simple: it was a male monkey." Of course there are many ways of writing it. I tried my best not to change the meaning.
Just take note of articles : a, an & the.
Did you know that many of the same type of fruit together = fruit? Many different types of fruits together = fruits.
I hope it helps. :)
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Cheeky monkey!
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the monkey grabbed the bag and rushed to the opposite side of the road. No time to correct the whole text. Teaching in a few moments. Have a good evening.
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