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My Diary Day 1 I've decided to write some short pieces of information about my daily events. I've just returned from school, I had an English class tonight (this is ESL program which means "English as a Second Language"). I study in a big class, there are many students from different countries around the world. Sometimes it's so hard to understand their accents! I've studied English for two months since I arrived in the US to visit my sister. It's a great opportunity to learn English here, it obviously much more effectively to learn English here than in Russia. Frankly speaking, I thought it's absolutely impossible to know English but now I don't think so. In other words, I used to think about English as about something unreachable to me. It is still hard to understand speech, to write, but the hardest thing for me is speaking, of course. Trying to explain my thoughts as natural as it possible... That's why I've decided to write my diary notes here. I will appreciate any help from English-people! Thank you and we'll see tomorrow!

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My Diary Day 1

I've decided to write some short pieces of information about my daily events. I've just returned from school. I had an English class tonight (this is ESL program which means 'English as a Second Language'). I study in a big class, and there are many students from different countries around the world. Sometimes it's so hard to understand their accents!


I've studied English for two months since I arrived in the US to visit my sister. It's a great opportunity to learn English here, it's obviously much more effective to learn English here than in Russia. Frankly speaking, I thought it was absolutely impossible to know English, but now I don't think so. In other words, I used to think about English as something unreachable for me. It is still hard to understand speech, and to write, but the hardest thing for me is speaking, of course. Trying to explain my thoughts as natural as possible. That's why I've decided to write my diary notes here. I will appreciate any help from English speaking people! Thank you, and we'll see you tomorrow!

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Well done Kirill! I enjoyed your writing and your honesty. Keep up the great work!
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Hello,I'm also an English learner~ your diary is fluent and natural, but I think you could use less present perfect tense,eg:I've decided → I decide to, how about that, just a few opinions

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