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Hi Neil,
Regarding the photos you sent yesterday, our technician informed it was the drive connector not the motor connector.
The motor has two wires, one is power wire and the other one is drive wire.
We need photos of these two wires, pls contact with your technician.
Waiting for your replay.
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Hi Neil,Regarding the photos you sent yesterday, our technician informed me/us it was the drive connector not the motor connector.
The motor has two wires, one is a power wire and the other one is a drive wire.
We need photos of these two wires, please get in contact with your technician.
Waiting for your replayreply.
Only a couple mistakes :) and I didn't know if you misspelled "please" or just wrote it short on purpose?
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Hi Neil,Regarding the photos you sent yesterday, our technician informed us that it was the drive connector not the motor connector.
The motor has two wires: One is the power wire and the other one is the drive wire.
We need photos of these two wires, so please have your technician contact us.
We will be awaiting your reply.
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"Hi, Neil." is a good habit to get into, IMHO. :)
You only need the comma if you're saying "Dear Neil, <and then the thing you're saying to Neil>". Here you're greeting Neil in the first sentence, and that's all. So no comma at the end of that sentence. And getting into the habit of using a comma before the person (or set) you're addressing is a really good idea. That way you'll use it when omitting would be embarrassing and you'll be helping the rest of the world get into the habit, too. :)
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Hi Neil,Regarding the photos you sent us yesterday, our technician informed us that they were
The motor concerned has two wires, one of which is the power wire and the other
We need some photos of these two wires, so please contact
Waiting for your replay.> We look forward to your reply
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