post offices

It is a popularly beleived belief that post offices are becoming less popular, and they will soon disappear. A lot of people think that these institutions are no longer necessary. I would like (Allow me) to explain my point of view on this situation.
There are many things to be against reasons opposed to this opinion. Firstly, some people still use the post to contact with others. Older generations can't work with can find the Internet difficult to use., anyway. Moreover, classical letters writing lets us feel the spirit of the past.
Some people believe that post offices aren't necessary anymore. I disagree with this statement because the establishments like these are the a part of the history.
In conclusion, it seems to me that post offices have to be a place in our society. In my opinion, they are still necessary, even in the age of the Internet.

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Nice work Liubov. It could be a good idea to use a different word here, as you already used "popular" in the sentence. I would suggest "relevant."

Hope this helps!

Regina :)

post offices

It is popularly beleived("i" before "e" except after "c" and words that rhyme with "weigh".   butI think this might just be a typo because later you spell it correctly) that post offices are becoming less popular and they will soon disappear. A lot of people think that these institutions are no longer necessary. I would like to explain my point of view on this situation.
There are many things to be against this opinion. Firstly, some people still use post the post office to contact with others (one could say "...connect with others). Older generations can't work with the Internet, anyway. Moreover, classical letters let us feel the spirit of the past.
Some people believe that post offices aren't necessary anymore. I disagree with this statement because the establishments like these are the part of the history.
In conclusion, it seems to me that post offices have to be in our society. In my opinion, they are still necessary even in the age of the Internet.

(very nice!  there are some repetitions that are unnecessary but for the purpose of practice it's fine.)