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3 sentences Mother's get less sleep than fathers. According to the research held by USA University women who have children suffer from deprivation of sleep. Lack of sleep has a negative impact on mental and physical well being. Surprisingly, men usually remained unaffected by sleepless nights.

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3 sentences Mother's Mothers get less sleep than fathers.

According to the research, held by USA University women who have children suffer from sleep deprivation of sleep. Lack of sleep has a negative impact on both mental and physical well being. Surprisingly, men usually generally remained unaffected by sleepless nights.


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I'm not sure what you mean exactly by "According to the research held by USA". Do you mean, "According to a study conducted in the US"? You could also say, according to research (which is what I've marked down above). 

I also changed usually to generally. I don't think usually is wrong but generally sounds better to me. Below is one explanation of the difference between usually, generally and normally. I hope that helps!


They are generally similar, but as the basic meanings of those words show, generally seems to look at the broad picture and does not worry about minor details; normally focuses on the norm as opposed to exceptions; usually talks about frequency of events or describes a habit.

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According to the research held done by USA a University in the USA, women who have children suffer from deprivation of sleep sleep deprivation. Lack of sleep has a negative impact on mental and physical well being. Surprisingly, men usually remain unaffected by sleepless nights.

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Hope this helps!

Regina :)

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3 sentences Mother's get less sleep than fathers.

According to the research held by USA University, women who have children suffer from deprivation of sleep. Lack of sleep has a negative impact on mental and physical well being. Surprisingly, men usually remained  remain (or have remained -  if you want to speak about historical trends of deprivation of sleep on men) unaffected by sleepless nights.

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