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How I met my girlfriend Hello, my name is Luis, I am from Ecuador but I lived quite a few years in Spain, I would like to tell you the story of how I met my partner and future mother of my child. Her name is GA, she is from Ecuador and she lived in Spain in the same small city as I did, we both lived there for many years but we never met each other even though that city is very small, although we had some mutual friends there, we never had the chance of seeing each other. Anyway, I left the city due life issues, basically because I did not have any job at the time and it was quite tough to find something related what I studied for, so I decided to come to London and ever since things have been changing very well with me. Here in London I have got a very good friend( he is from Ecuador too and, I met him in Spain), one day in summer he invited me to go out and told me that he was going to meet someone he knew but they had not seen each other for quite along time. she came to the place where we were and my friend introduced her to me, she and I spent the whole night sitting in that pub talking while my friend was getting fun dancing with some girls , we started hanging out very frequently since that day and eventually we became boyfriend and girlfriend, everything has been happening really good so far and we are waiting for our first baby, the baby should be here in august. Thank you so much for reading and correcting my writing.

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How I met my girlfriend

Hello, my name is Luis, I am from Ecuador but I lived for quite a few years in Spain, I would like to tell you the story of how I met my partner and future mother of my child.
Her name is GA, she is from Ecuador and she lived in Spain in the same small city as I did, we both lived there for many years but we never met each other even though that city is was very small, although we had some mutual friends there, we never had the chance of seeing each other.
Anyway, I left the city due life issues, basically because I did not have any job at the time and it was quite tough to find something related to what I had studied for, so I decided to come go to London and ever since things have been changing very well with me. things have been going very well for me.
Here in London I have got a very good friend( he is from Ecuador too and, I met him in Spain), one day in summer he invited me to go out and told me that he was going to meet someone he knew but they had not seen each other for quite along a long time.
she came to the place where we were and my friend introduced her to me, she and I spent the whole night sitting in that pub talking while my friend was getting having fun dancing with some girls , we started hanging out very frequently since that day and eventually we became boyfriend and girlfriend, everything has been happening really good so far and we are waiting for our first baby, the baby should be here in august.
Thank you so much for reading and correcting my writing.
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How I met my girlfriend

Hello, my name is Luis. I am from Ecuador but I lived quite a few years in Spain. I would like to tell you the story of how I met my partner and future mother of my child.
Her name is GA. She is from Ecuador and she lived in Spain in the same small city as I did. We both lived there for many years. but We never met each other even though that city is very small. Although we had some mutual friends there, we never had the chance of seeing each other.
Anyway, I left the city due life issues, basically because I did not have any a job at the time and it was quite tough to find something related what I studied for. So I decided to come move to London and ever since things have been changing very well with for the better for me.
Here in London I have got a very good friend (he is from Ecuador too and, I met him in Spain). One day in summer he invited me to go out and told me that he was going to meet someone he knew but they had not seen each other for quite a long time.
She came to the place where we were and my friend introduced her to me. She and I spent the whole night sitting in that pub talking while my friend was getting having fun dancing with some girls. We started  have been hanging out very frequently a lot since that day and eventually we became boyfriend and girlfriend. Everything has been happening really good going really well so far and we are waiting for our first baby. The baby should be here in August.
Thank you so much for reading and correcting my writing.


Great job and congratulations! 





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Hi Luis.

You've got a really great level of English! It looks like you could use some help with longer, more complex sentences. I recommend this book for a good overview of clauses (the major separation blocks of English sentences) and how to separate them: https://goo.gl/L9KoXY  Hope that helps!

:) Misty

How I met my girlfriend

Hello, my name is Luis, I am from Ecuador but I lived quite a few years in Spain, I would like to tell you the story of how I met my partner and future mother of my child.
Her name is GA, she is from Ecuador and she lived in Spain in the same small city as I did, we both lived there for many years but we never met each other even though that city is very small, although we had some mutual friends there, we never had the chance of seeing each other.
Anyway, I left the city due life issues, basically because I did not have any job at the time and it was quite tough to find something related what I studied for, so I decided to come to London and ever since things have been changing very well with me.
Here in London I have got a very good friend( he is from Ecuador too and, I met him in Spain), one day in summer he invited me to go out and told me that he was going to meet someone he knew but they had not seen each other for quite along time.
she came to the place where we were and my friend introduced her to me, she and I spent the whole night sitting in that pub talking while my friend was getting fun dancing with some girls , we started hanging out very frequently since that day and eventually we became boyfriend and girlfriend, everything has been happening really good so far and we are waiting for our first baby, the baby should be here in august.
Thank you so much for reading and correcting my writing.
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How I met my girlfriend

Hello, my name is Luis, I am from Ecuador but I lived quite a few years in Spain ->>in Spain for quite a few years, I would like to tell you the story of how I met my partner and future mother of my child.
Her name is GA, she is from Ecuador and she lived in Spain in the same small city as I did, we both lived there for many years but we never met each other even though that city is very small, although we had some mutual friends there, we never had the chance of seeing each other.
Anyway, I left the city due to life issues, basically because I did not have any job at the time and it was quite tough to find something related to what I studied for, so I decided to come to London and ever since things have been changing very well with --> for me.
Here in London I have got a very good friend( he is from Ecuador too and, I met him in Spain), one day in summer he invited me to go out and told me that he was going to meet someone he knew but they had not seen each other for quite a long time.
she--> GA came to the place where we were and my friend introduced her to me, she and I spent the whole night sitting in that pub talking while my friend was getting --> having fun dancing with some girls , we started hanging out very frequently since --> from that day and eventually we became boyfriend and girlfriend, everything has been happening --> going really good--> well so far and we are waiting for our first baby, the baby should be here in august-> August.
Thank you so much for reading and correcting my writing.



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