See the doctor
This afternoon, I found I got a headache. I went to the hospital to see the doctor who was a young man. He suggested me to have a CT scan and asked me to give him the check report later. I waited for an hour about the report. Fortunately, the doctor told me I would not to take medicine and only need to have a rest. I wondered that my illness was concerned about the lack of resting. So, it is important for keeping a healthy body. I could not to go to the hospital again!
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Seeing the doctor
This afternoon, I found I got a headache, so (good to join the two sentences together here to make a longer one. This helps the writing to flow better)I went to the hospital to see the a ('the' is also ok here, but 'a' is better. 'a' refers to a specific doctor)doctor. The doctor was a young man, and he suggested me to that I (with 'suggest', you can have the pattern 'suggest +___ing' or 'suggest that...')have a CT scan and asked me to give him the check report later. I waited for an hour about for the report. Fortunately, the doctor told me I would not need to take any medicine, and I only needed (needed is better here because you used 'would' in the first part of the sentence. It is also possible to use 'will' in the first part of the sentence, and then to use just 'need' in the second part of the sentence)to have a rest. I wondered that whether my illness was concerned about the caused by a (caused by is better when talking about illness)lack of resting. (resting is ok but 'rest' as a noun is better because it is shorter, also 'lack of rest' is a strong phrase in English, so other variations of it sound strange)So, because (again better to link sentences here)it is important for keeping a healthy body. I could not won't need to go to the hospital again!Want to progress faster?
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