POLITICS IN MY COUNTRY WE voted for a new president in Ecuador because Mr Correa is angry and tired. In fact ,many people said,"we do not have job.".So that day My grandmother and i went to vote .We

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Bayron Castillo

POLITICS IN MY COUNTRY WE voted for a new president in Ecuador because Mr Correa is angry and tired. In fact ,many people said,"we do not have job.".So that day My grandmother and i went to vote .We got on to the bus but there was a big traffic of course for elections.When we finally got .We saw many people there.IT was crowded , we drank somo water and after that we voted.I chose to MR.LASSO. i only hoped to be him a good choice .At 12 we ate our lunch, it was so difficult to look for a good restaurant , the sun was shining hard , my legs was swollen so my grandmother said ,"we are going to the uncleshome.".We went but they were busy and so tired . so we went to take a taxi but there was not a a taxi . We waited for 1 hour , and i was angry with myself , when we finally arrived to our home .I turned on the tv, so the president said,"there is a secon election.".Because there is not president yet AND THE NEW ELECTIONS WILL BE ON APRIL,2 nd, I SAID,"COME ON."...

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POLITICS IN ECUADOR (be specific)

We voted for a new president in Ecuador because Mr. (President?) Correa is angry and tired. In fact ,many people say, "we do not have a job. So that day, My grandmother and i went to vote. We got on to the bus, but of course there was a lot of traffic because of the election. When we finally got there, we saw many people. It was crowded. We drank some of the water, and after that, we voted. I chose to vote for MR. LASSO. I only hoped he is a good choice. At 12 (or noon), we ate our lunch.

It was so difficult to find a good restaurant. The sun was shining brightly. Furthermore, my legs were swollen.

(as a reader, I am not sure how these three points are connected, so you would need to connect them somehow. I think these are reasons why it was so hard to find a good restaurant? but as a reader, I cannot just assume this.)

) So my grandmother said, "we are going to my uncle's home."

We went to his house, but he was busy and so tired, so we went to take a taxi, but there was not a a taxi. We waited for 1 hour, and i was angry with myself. (you need to somehow relate why you're angry. are you angry with yourself because you had to wait an hour for a taxi?)

when we finally arrived home, I turned on the tv.

so the president said, "there is a second election" because

there will not be a president yet, AND THE NEW ELECTIONS WILL BE ON APRIL, 2. I SAID, "COME ON..."

Great work. Please see my parenthetic comments. Also, I want you to pay particular attention to how you use punctuation. If you have any questions, feel free to message me. If you don't feel comfortable asking them in English, you are welcome to ask in Spanish.

Good luck, and happy writing!

Wenwei

Hi Bayron, Is this a common problem in Ecuador? Why did they move the election date? How do you feel about politics there? Do you think Mr. Lasso can solve the problems in the government?

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