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The bar chart demonstrates the gender distribution of teachers in different kinds of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
In three of six institutions, women outnumbered men. Apparently from the chart, there exists a big difference between the man and women in nursery and primary schools (approximately 90 percent). In general there are more female teachers in the following kinds of institution: nursery/pre-school, primary school and secondary school.
The percentage of male and female teachers at colleges had equal representation (50 percent). However, at the private training institutions and universities males outnumbered females. Especially the difference between male and female teachers is clearly visible at the universities (approximately 40-50 percent). But this difference is not as high as at nursery and primary schools.
As a result, the bar chart illustrates that female teachers exceeded male teachers in the first stages of education, while men teachers outnumbered women in universities.
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bar chart
The bar chart demonstrates shows the gender distribution of teachers in different kinds of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.In three of six institutions institutions or kinds of institutions?, women outnumbered men. Apparently From the chart we can see that there exists is a big difference in distribution between the man men and women in nursery and primary schools (approximately 90 percent). In general there are more female teachers in the following kinds of institutions: nursery / preschool, primary school and secondary school. Say this part first, otherwise it is not clear whether these are female-dominated or male-dominated institutions.
The percentage of Male and female teachers at colleges had equal representation at colleges (50 percent). However, at the private training institutions and universities males outnumbered females. Especially The difference between male and female teachers distribution is clearly especially visible at the universities (approximately 40-50 percent Is this 40% female 50% male?). But this difference is not as high as the one at nursery and primary schools.
As a result In conclusion, the bar chart illustrates that female teachers exceeded male teachers in the first early stages of education, while men male teachers outnumbered women in universities.
It seems that you are preparing for a high-stakes test. It is difficult to make specific comments without being able to see the bar chart. Some things to pay attention to are to choose the correct subject (distribution of teachers by gender, not teachers or men or women), structural language for describing charts, and generally making the information clear. You are clearly trying to demonstrate your vocabulary throughout the writing. However, be careful not to do so in stock phrases; instead, you can find more specific descriptive words and vary your linking language.
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