Report on how spend money to requalify an area
Your town has a large amount of money available to spend on improving the area around your school. Your English teacher has asked you to write a report suggesting how it can be improved
Our school area
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to point out which can be the targets to be improved with the fund our town hall has made available in order to requalify the area around our school.
The park
As we all know the park besides the school had been abandoned for 5 years now and it has to be requalified in order to make some space useful for outdoor activities such sports. There, it can also be created an area where students can get exercise on their own.
The parking area
The parking area on the back side of the school is too small for all the vehicles our professors and our students have. A good way to spend the money could be enlarging the area in which the cars can park in, that not only may reduce the stress in finding parking but it can also make the school look more organized and better managed.
Conclusion
I, as pointed out in this report, recommend to spend the money to requalify both the park and the parking area in order to create an healthier environment in which students can learn and grow up.
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Report on how spend money to requalify an area
Your town has a large amount of money available to spend on improving the area around your school. Your English teacher has asked you to write a report suggesting how it can be improvedOur school area
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to point out which (what) can be the targets to be improved (you don't improve targets, you hit them) with OF the fund our town hall has made available in order to requalify the area around our school.
The park
As we all know the park besides the school had been abandoned for 5 years now and it has to be requalified in order to make some space useful for outdoor activities such AS sports. There, it can also be created an area where students can get exercise on their own.
The parking area
The parking area BEHIND on the back side of the school is too small for all the vehicles our professors and our students have. A good way to spend the money could be enlarging the area in which the cars can park in, that not only may reduce the stress in finding parking but it can also make the school look more organized and better managed.
Conclusion
I, as pointed out in this report, recommend to spendING the money to requalify both the park and the parking area in order to create an healthier environment in which students can learn and grow up.
Actually pretty good, your errors are only a lack of experience in odd uses of the language, so, for example the "back side" of a school makes complete sense until you realise that to a native that could read as the bottom (that which you sit on) of a school.
Target is another sticky one, the objective might be "get more parking spaces" the target might be "get more than 50 car parking spaces.
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