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Dear mam Dear mam. Thanks very much for looking after your grandson while we are in the theatre. I am positive that you don’t need any instructions, but just in case… First of all, make sure that he isn’t hungry. Let him play in his room as much as he wants. Do not disturb him while he is playing by himself. Usually, he is able to play without demanding any attention during half an hour. Then he will ask you to turn on cartoons. Just press ON buttons on each of two remote controls. Meanwhile, he is watching TV you have time to cook a porridge for him (the saucepan on the left shelf and the corn packet on the lower cupboard). Please, don’t forget to add some slices of banana into the porridge. Whatever you do, please, avoid giving him sweets before the dinner. Then, when he will be tired watching the TV, give him a porridge, after that he can get cookies. Finally, before sleeping, read him a book, he will point to his favourite one. I hope we will manage to be as soon as possible.

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Dear mam

Dear mam.
Thanks very much for looking after your grandson while we are in the theatre.
I am positive that you don’t need any instructions, but just in case…
First of all, make sure that he isn’t hungry. Let him play in his room as much as he wants. Do not disturb him while he is playing by himself. Usually, he is able to play without demanding any attention during for half an hour.
Then he will ask you to turn on cartoons. Just press the ON buttons on each of the two remote controls.
Meanwhile, while he is watching TV you have time to cook a porridge for him (the saucepan on the left shelf and the corn packet on the lower cupboard). Please, don’t forget to add some slices of banana into the porridge.
Whatever you do, please, avoid giving him sweets before the dinner.
Then, when he will be after he is tired from watching the TV, give him a porridge, then after that he can get cookies.
Finally, before sleeping, read him a book, he will point to his favourite one.
I hope we will manage to be as soon as possible.   ?

I don't understand the last sentence, but the rest is very well written.

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