Could someone please check my cover letter. Have to send it tomorrow. Thank you for you help!
I am writing to express a strong interest in Sales Assistant position currently available at the (.....) website. My strong and focused approach towards sales and great customer service make me a perfect candidate for this job.
In view of the requirements stated in your job description, I am able to perform all tasks of Sales Assistant efficiently. Particularly, I am a highly skilled salesperson, who is qualified in handling cash drawer, refilling and replenishing merchandise and recommending customers on product features and benefits. For the last two years I successfully have been working for (.....) and always strives for obtaining sales targets. I am also familiar with KPI´s and use it for increase my individual sales on a daily basis at work.
I enjoy working in the sales and fashion industry and feel I am most proficient in developing great rapport with the customers I deal with. I am trustworthy and reliable and take great pleasure in my work. Besides, I am a lively team player who works effectively with co-workers.
I feel I can add an asset to your company and at the same time the position would be the ideal setting in which I could utilize my interpersonal and sales skills in order to effectively contribute to the organisation’s overall success and profitability.
Thank you for considering me for this Sales Assistant position. I look forward to meeting with you soon.
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Could someone please check my cover letter. Have to send it tomorrow. Thank you for you help!
I am writing to express my strong interest in the Sales Assistant position currently available at the (.....) website. My strong and focused approach towards sales and great customer service, I hope, make me a suitable candidate for this job.In view of the requirements stated in your job description, I am able to perform all tasks of Sales Assistant efficiently. Particularly, I am a highly skilled salesperson, who is qualified in handling cash drawer, refilling and replenishing merchandise and advising customers on product features and benefits. For the last two years I have been successfully working for (.....) and have always striven to get high sales targets. I am also familiar with KPI´s and use them to increase my individual sales on a daily basis at work.
I enjoy working in the sales and fashion industry and feel I am most proficient in developing a warm rapport with the customers I deal with. I am trustworthy and reliable and take great pleasure in my work. Also, I am a lively team player who works effectively with co-workers.
I feel I can be an asset to your company and at the same time the position would be the ideal setting in which I could utilize my interpersonal and sales skills in order to effectively contribute to the organisation’s overall success and profitability.
Thank you for considering me for this Sales Assistant position. I look forward to meeting with you soon.
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