Could you please correct my mistakes? Thanks in advance!
Yesterday Emma had a few of her friends over for dinner. She had graduated from university so she invited them to celebrate her success. They arrived at about 6p.m. They welcomed each other with a wide smile. They got inside, threw their coats over the back of a chair and went to a living room. They sat down at a desk and started enjoying their time. Emma had prepared a lot of delicious things. After a while she happened to pouring wine into glasses when John accidentally knocked her hand. Unfortunately she spilled all over his white T-shirt. He immediately ran away to bathroom screaming: "My new T-shirt! It will never wash out!" Emma felt so silly. She could see from his face he was being offended. His lovely T-shirt was of no use at all. Anyway she promised him to buy another one.
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Could you please correct my mistakes? Thanks in advance!
Yesterday Emma had a few of her friends over for dinner. She had just graduated from university so she invited them to celebrate her success. They arrived at about 6p.m. She welcomed them with a wide smile and they went inside, threw their coats over the back of a chair and went into the living room. They sat down at a table and started enjoying their time. Emma had prepared a lot of delicious things. After a while when pouring wine into some glasses, John accidentally knocked her hand. Unfortunately the wine spilled all over his white T-shirt. He immediately ran away to the bathroom screaming: "My new T-shirt! It will never wash out!" Emma felt so silly. She could see from his face he was upset. His lovely T-shirt was now useless. Anyway she promised to buy him another one.very well written!
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