Are these sentence correct grammatically? Arad 又一次我散步的时候！我看一辆写在一家鞋店！我非常喜欢写的样子和颜色！所以我进去那家鞋店！店里有贵的鞋！我清瘦花园，给我拿凉鞋四十四号！他给了我写！可是我一世，觉得那些事很小，所以闻说花园给我四十五的！可是那些事很大！所以我没有买哪些！

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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Arad

在我又一次散步的时候，我看见一家鞋店！我非常喜欢鞋子的样子和颜色，所以我就进去了。我请售货员给我拿四十四号的凉鞋，可是我一试，觉得有点小，所以请售货员给我换成四十五的。可是试了以后又有点大！所以我就没有买那双鞋。

Are these sentence correct grammatically? Arad

又有一次我散步的时候！我见看一辆写在一家鞋店！我非常喜欢鞋写的样式子和颜色！所以我进去那家鞋店！店里有很多贵的鞋！我请服务员清瘦花园，给我拿凉鞋四十四号的！他给了我鞋写！感觉可是我一世，觉得那些事很小，所以请服务员又闻说花园又给我拿四十五的！可是又太大了那些事很大！所以我没有买哪些！

Thanks so much

you use “！” too often.we won'do like this in chinese～

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