Introducing myself

My name is Jack. I’m 23 years old. I love listening to music very much. Eminem is my favorite singer, I think he is the best rapper in the world. (Although "name's" is correct, it is not commonly used.)
His songs make  me feel good. When I was 17 years old, I listened to rap music at my best friend’s house. When the music started, I felt pretty good. Rap music makes people excited. I love English very much. I’m learning English every day. It’s a very important language in the world, so I must study it. Sometimes I like watching a movie on my computer. It makes me feel relaxed.  It relaxes me.

Introducing myself

My name’s Jack. I’m 23 years old. I love listening to music very much. Eminem is my favorite singer, I think he is the best rapper in the world.
His songs make me fell good. When I was 17 years old, I listened to rap music in my best friend’s house. When the music started I felt pretty good. Rap music makes people excited. I love English very much. I’m learning English every day. It’s a very important language in the world. So I must study it. Sometimes I like watching movies on my computer. It makes me feel relaxed.