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Career choice
No one can deny the fact that parents give their children tremendous love. But when children grow up, they gradually develop their own opinions. Particularly in career choice, parents are really different from their children.or:
No one can deny the fact that parents give their children tremendous love. But when children grow up, they gradually develop their own opinions, especially in career choice, parents are really different from their children.
Firstly, parents want to make the choice for their children. They think they have a duty to make their children's future lives clear. Secondly, most parents think professions like teaching, medicine, etc are ideal, as no matter how much the job market changes in the future, their children will have a stable salary. In my opinion, when children face the career choice, we should let them choose for themselves. It is their own road.
(I recommend you rewrite this first sentence, as its meaning is unclear) In conclusion, children are gradually becoming old, the world will wait for them to create. Letting them choose a career they really love, demonstrates the sincere love of parents.
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