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Career choice No one can deny the fact that parents give their children tremendous love. But when children grow up, they are gradually have their own opinions to something, especially in career choice, parents are really differ from their children. For one thing, parents want to make the choice for children. They think they have duty to make their children's future life clear. For other, most parents think the profession like teacher, doctor, etc are ideal profession, no matter how big changes in the future, their children will have a fondamental salary. But I think, when children face the career choice, let them choose by themselves. It's their own road. In a word, children is gradually become old, this world will waiting them to create, Let them to choose their really love career, it's the sincere love of parents.

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Yes, u are right
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The world is changing beyond our imagination, listening to our parents' advice, and making our own choices
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Career choice

No one can deny the fact that parents give their children tremendous love. But when children grow up, they gradually develop their own opinions. Particularly in career choice, parents are really different from their children.

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No one can deny the fact that parents give their children tremendous love. But when children grow up, they gradually develop their own opinions, especially in career choice, parents are really different from their children.


Firstly, parents want to make the choice for their children. They think they have a duty to make their children's future lives clear. Secondly, most parents think professions like teaching, medicine, etc are ideal, as no matter how much the job market changes in the future, their children will have a stable salary. In my opinion, when children face the career choice, we should let them choose for themselves. It is their own road.


(I recommend you rewrite this first sentence, as its meaning is unclear) In conclusion, children are gradually becoming old, the world will wait for them to create. Letting them choose a career they really love, demonstrates the sincere love of parents.

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