PRACTISING in the rigth way. In my last entry, I made some mistakes when I tried to utilise some words and expressions. Now I will write something utilising these same words and expressions in the rig

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Paulo Albuquerque

PRACTISING in the rigth way. In my last entry, I made some mistakes when I tried to utilise some words and expressions. Now I will write something utilising these same words and expressions in the right way. I hope don't make the same mistakes again. When We are PRACTISING a new language, with the intention of write or speak better, a lot of time We made mistakes. NEAR THE WINDOW of my bedroom is a curtain. It left my bedroom very dark, so I removed it and threw it away. Now the light of the sun can enter with no problem. I was walking DOWN THE STREET, when, suddenly, I come across a huge dog, drooling and growling to me. I didn't think twice and I ran out far away. I like to TAKE A BATH. There are places where they TAKE A BATH only once a week. In other places, they TAKE two or three BATHS a day. But I think that is enough to TAKE A BATH a day. Where do you live there are BUSYBODY NEIGHBOURS? In the area where I live there are a lot of NEIGHBOURS WHO ARE BUSYBODIES. This is not too good. Why they don't take care of their own lives?

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PRACTISING in the right way.

In my last entry, I made some mistakes when I tried to utilise some words and expressions. Now I will utilise the same words and expressions in the right way. I hope I will not make the same mistakes again.

When we are PRACTISING a new language, with the intention to write or speak better, we often make a lot of mistakes.
NEAR THE WINDOW of my bedroom is a curtain, which darkens the bedroom, so I removed it and threw it away. Now sunlight can enter my bedroom with no problem.

I was walking DOWN THE STREET, when, all of a sudden, I came across a huge dog, drooling and growling to me. I didn't think twice and I ran far away.

I like to TAKE A BATH. There are places where people TAKE A BATH only once a week. In other places, they TAKE two or three BATHS a day. But I think taking bath once a day is enough.

Where are places with NEIGHBOURS who are busy bodies? In the area where I live, there are a lot of NEIGHBOURS WHO ARE BUSYBODIES. This is not too good. Why don't they take care of their own lives?

Theres no need to capitalize any words

I hope this helps

Casey

PRACTISING in the rigth way.

In my last entry, I made some mistakes when I tried to utilise some words and expressions. Now I will write something utilising these same words e expressions in the right way. I hope don't make the same mistakes again.

When We are PRACTISING a new language, with the intention of write or speak better, a lot of time We made mistakes.

NEAR THE WINDOW of my bedroom is a curtain. It left my bedroom very dark, so I removed it and threw it away. Now the ~~light of the sun~~ sunlight can enter with no problem.

I was walking DOWN THE STREET, when, suddenly, I come across a huge dog, drooling and growling to me. I didn't think twice and I ran out far away.

I like to TAKE A BATH. There are places where they TAKE A BATH only once a week. In other places, they TAKE two or three BATHS a day. But I think that is enough to TAKE A BATH a day.

Where you live are there are BUSYBODY NEIGHBOURS? In the area where I live there are a lot of NEIGHBOURS WHO ARE BUSYBODIES. This is not too good. Why don't they don't take care of their own lives?

Great English! Nothing really to correct - but you could say "sunlight" instead of "light of the sun" . .

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