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Is it better to have a holiday abroad or stay in your own country? Most of the people in this world enjoy visiting new places on holidays and dream about having a good time in an exotic country far away from their own. But also, many people long to spend their free time in a calm and quiet location near their homes. So, what could be a better option? There are a lot of points you should take into account before planning your holidays. One of the main points is the money you are willing to pay. Maybe you are thinking about having a luxurious holiday abroad, but in this case you need to take care that you have enough money so you have to think twince in case you cannot afford the cost. You'd better choose a cheaper destination or try with a touristic place near you, it could be charming as well! Another important factor is that you should bear in mind if you want to travel abroad is the security. Some countries have a lot of criminal rates, so you have to make sure that your destination is not one of these. You also have to take some precautions like use Sun cream in a sunny place or vaccinate yourself against some foreign illNess or some kind of insects like mosquitoes. On the contrary, it's much easier if your destination is within your own country. Finally, your decision could depend on the purpose of your travel, if it's just relaxing or cultural. It's not the same to decide if you want to spend your holidays just chilling out or you want something more educational, looking out for interesting places such as museums, exhibitions and monuments. In the former case, any place could be a great choice, even your own country , especially if it has a good weather, whereas in the later one you can get more trouble because maybe there aren't so many options around you, or maybe you are interested in getting in touch with a specifical foreign culture. All in all, both options have their pros and cons, so you have to think it very carefully before making a decision.

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Is it better to have a holiday abroad or stay in your own country?

Most of the people in this/the world enjoy visiting new places on holidays and dream about having a good time in an exotic country far away from their own place. But also, many people long to spend their free time in a calm and quiet location near their homes. So, what could be a the better option ?

[Also you could say: "which option is better?"]

There are a lot of points you should take into account before planning your holidays. One of the main points is the money you are willing to pay. Maybe you are thinking about having a luxurious holiday abroad, but in this case you need to take care that you have enough money, so you have to think twice twince in case you cannot afford the cost. You'd better choose/You'd be better off with a cheaper destination or try (for) with a touristic/touristy place near you. It could be charming as well!

Another important factor is that you should bear in mind if you want to travel abroad is (the) security. Some countries have a lot of criminal rates high crime rate so you have to make sure that your destination is not one of these. You also have to take some precautions like using e Sun suncream in a sunny place or vaccinate yourself against some foreign illness/diseases illNess or some kind of insects like mosquitoes. On the contrary, it's much easier if your destination is within your own country.

Finally, your decision could depend on the purpose of your travel, if it's just relaxing or cultural. It's not the same to decide if you want to spend your holidays just chilling out or you want something more educational, looking out for interesting places such as museums, exhibitions and monuments. In the former case, any place could be a great choice, even your own country, especially if it has good weather / a good climate, whereas in the latter case one, you can get (into) more trouble because maybe there aren't so many options around you, or maybe you are interested in getting in touch with a specific al foreign culture.

All in all, both options have their pros and cons, so you have to think about it/think it through very carefully before making a decision.

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