Our new appartment
My wife and I’ve got married recently.
So, as all recently married, we had to move to a new house.
We chose to live in an apparment, because its location is very good. It’s on the center of the city, pretty close to the commerce, the banks and supermarkets. Either, it’s close to my wife’s job.
But, we also had problems to move. We had to buy some wardrobs to our room and they were so expensive. As well, the store has lated to deliver them and it caused some problems to us.
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Our new appartment
My wife and I’ve got married recently. My girlfriend/fiance and I recently got married.So, as all newly weds recently married, we had to move to a new house.
We chose to live in an appartment, because its location is very good. It’s in the center of the city, pretty close to the commercial area, the banks and supermarkets. Either, It’s also close to my wife’s job.
But, we also had problems with the to move. We had to buy some wardrobes for to our room and they were so expensive. The store did not deliver them on time As well, the store has lated to deliver them and it caused some problems for to us.
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Good job! Just a few tweaks to make things sound a little more natural and some different word choices.
Our new appartment
My wife and I’ve recently got married recently. (You could also say My wife and I got married recently, but putting "recently" first sounds a little more natural to me).So, as like all recently married couples, we had to move to a home of our own. (You could say "...we had to move to a new house", but I think "...a home of our own" is a little more natural-sounding and clearer.)
We chose (you could also use "we decided") to live in an apartment apparment, because it is in a very good location its location is very good. It’s in on the center of the city, pretty close to the commerce the banks and supermarkets. Either Also (or you could use "additionally"), it’s close to my wife’s job. (what do you mean by commerce? Shops, restaurants, and other businesses/services?)
Unfortunately But, we also have had experienced some problems related to our move. We had to buy some wardrobs wardrobes for to our room and they were so expensive. Additionally As well, the store has lated to delivered them late and it which caused some problems for to us.
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Our new apartment
My wife and I’ve got married recently.So, as all recently married, we had to move to a new house.
We chose to live in an apartment, because its location is very good. It’s on in the center of the city, pretty close to the commerce, the banks and supermarkets. Either also, it’s close to my wife’s job.
But, we also had problems to move. We had to buy some wardrobes to for our room and they were so expensive. As well, the store has was lated to deliver them and it caused some problems to for us.
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