The price of a house
I have graduated for almost six years and I have got married for one and a half years. Now my husband and I want to buy a house. But the price of a house is very expensive. We can't afford so much money if our parents don't help us. But both of our parents are all farmers, they don't have so much money. So we can't depend on anyone except ourself. We should work harder and harder to make more money. And I believe we can do it.
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The price of a house
I graduated six years ago and I have been married for one and a half years. Currently, my husband and I want to buy a house. However, the price of a house can be very expensive. We can not afford so much money on a house because our parents don't help us. Both of our parents are farmers and they don't have too much money; therefore we can't depend on anyone except ourselves. We will have to work harder and harder to make more money; I believe we can do it.I hope this helps.
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The price of a house
I have graduated for almost six years ago (you have to say how long it's been since you graduated. If you say I have graduated for almost six years, it sounds like you're constantly graduating when a graduation really only happens once) and I have got been married for one and a half years (you say you "I have been" to tell that you're describing how long your marrage has been going on. Marriage is continuous so you can say it this way, unlike graduation, which only happens once). Now my husband and I want to buy a house. But the price of a house is Houses are (you use the plural form of the noun when you're talking about something in general. You aren't talking about a specific house, you're talking about any house. Therefore, it needs to be plural) very expensive. We can't afford a house that costs (you have to tell what you can't afford, because you weren't talking about a specific house; If you were talking about a specific house and you already mentioned it, you could say "We can't afford it") so much money if our parents don't help us. But However, both of our parents are all farmers, so they don't have so ("so" shouldn't be here but the editor isn't letting me cross it out) much money. So Therefore, we can't depend on anyone except ourself ourselves. We should need to (if you use the word should, it means that it you might not have to do it. By saying "We need to..." , it tells that it's required to be done in order to achieve something) work harder and harder to make more money, and I believe we can do it.I hope this helps you!
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