what is the life?
Just now, My girlfriend and I discussed 'what is the life'. In china, We have a talk show named '奇葩说'. On this show, some young people talk about their life, their business and they attitude about life or something. My girlfriend thinks that they are all successful in their life, and she looks like a loser, she doesn't even know what is her want.
But I don't think so. In my opinion, Everyone is useful in our world, Maybe you are the company's boss, or maybe the beggar, whatever you do. the person's whole life is a process, which thinking about what you are, and we stay alive for what. No one could know what they want when they do not have deepth of human experience. and I think that don't let others affect your mood. It is not mature to think too much.
On this show, A person about twenty or thirty years old, who earned millions of money and then traveled around the world, and taught you what is the meaning of our life. What do you think about this?
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What is the meaning of life?
Just now, my girlfriend and I have been discussing (present perfect continuous is really useful after phrases such as 'just now', because it is something that has been continuing over a short period until the present time)discussed 'what is the meaning of life'. In China,(capital letter for names of countries) We have a talk show named '奇葩说'. On this show, some young people talk about their lives life, their business and their attitudes about towards life or something. My girlfriend thinks that they are all successful in their lives life, and she looks like a loser, she doesn't even know what she is her wants.But However, (we don't usually begin sentences with'but', but it is ok if you are writing informally)I don't think so. In my opinion, everyone(no capital letter after a comma) is useful has a function in our world whatever you do. Maybe you are the company's boss, or maybe the beggar, whatever you do. the A person's whole life is a process, which of thinking about what you are, and what we stay alive for what. No one could know what they want when they do not have any depth of human experience. and I think that don't you shouldn't (we don't usually use don't after 'that'. Don't is only used when speaking to people directly)let others affect your mood. It is not mature to think too much.
On this show, a person who is about twenty or thirty years old, who has earned millions of money and then traveled around the world, and taught teaches you what is the meaning of our life.('the meaning of life' is a fairly fixed phrase which means any other variation of it sounds quite strange. So I would say it is better to use the exact phrase here) What do you think about this?
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