Why I deserve a scholarship
I think that I can do that quite well now, but I would like to improve that while studying in LSE.
One of my wishes is to work in an International organization such as UN because I believe only a global organ has enough power to improve the situation in the world. I believe that studying in LSE will provide me with such a chance because a number of students who graduated from LSE work already in UN, UN’s programs and a fund. In addition, the teaching in LSE is on a very high level as the faculty consists of the best professors from different parts of the world. I like the structure of the course because I can concentrate on the subjects that are particularly interesting for me. The International Relations degree includes the studies of International Organizations that is valuable for me. I also would like to study International Protection of Human Rights because it is an urgent question today.
To sum up, LSE is everything that I could dream about and my hope is that it may become a reality.
I think I deserve an LSE Scholarship because I have already overcome many difficulties, and I believe that I can overcome the financial difficulty as well. To study in LSE, I learnt English, passed different tests, changed the school to study on International Baccalaureate to be able to apply to the university in UK, completed many forms, and waited nervously for the decision. Finally, I was jumping for joy when I received an offer. However, my parents were much more pragmatic as they told me that to receive an offer from LSE was only a half way – I had to find the way how to cover all the expenses connected with the studying abroad. Unfortunately, the contribution that my parents can make is quite modest because the standards of living and salaries in Russia and UK are hardly to be compared. The financial crisis and a crucial change of a currency exchange rate contributed to a difficult financial situation.
If I was to made an award, I would definitely spend the whole amount to cover the cost studying in LSE. I hope to cover to some extent my living expenses while working during the holidays and summer time. I want to concentrate only on my studies during term time because I think studying successfully and hard should be my main goal now. I think that a part of an scholarship may also go to help me to cover the cost of the dormitory.
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I think I deserve an LSE Scholarship because I have already overcome many difficulties, and I believe that I can overcome the financial difficulty as well. To study at the LSE, I learned* English, passed different tests, changed the schools in order to study the International Baccalaureate. to be able to apply to the university in UK, I also completed many forms, and waited nervously for the decision. Finally, I was jumping for joy when I received an offer. However, my parents were much more pragmatic as they told me that receiving an offer from the LSE meant that I was only a half way there. – I had to find the way how to cover all the expenses connected with the studying abroad. Finding a way to finance and sustain myself away from home was the next step. Unfortunately, the contribution that my parents can make is quite modest because the standards of living and salaries in Russia and UK are hardly to be compared beyond compare. The financial crisis and a crucial change of a in the currency exchange rate contributed to our difficult financial situation.
If I were to be made an award, I would definitely allocate the entire award to covering the cost of studying at the LSE. I hope to cover to some extent my living expenses while make up the rest by working during the holidays and summer time. I want to concentrate only on my studies during term time because I think studying successfully and hard should be my main goal now. I think that a part of an the scholarship may partly be spent on also go to help me to cover the cost of the dormitory.
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Most of the changes I made were motivated a need for by precision. Good luck.
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I think that I can do that quite well now, but I would like to improve that while studying at the LSE.
To sum up, LSE is everything that I could dream of and my hope is that it may become a reality.
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Wish you good luck!
Things which probably you might consider to change:
1) The structure of the answer.
For ex., to begin with "I want to study here for two reasons: the professors are good, and I will be able to work in the UN." Afterwards further details can be given. This way it sounds clearer.
Also this way it becomes clear that now your answer to the question why you deserve the scholarship is "because I have been accepted, but don't have enough money to pay for the education". Probably, some more details about why you're a good fit for them might be more convincing here.
2) The articles: the UK, the UN.
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John, I don't think laughing out loud is at all productive in this situation. And economics is not as straightforward as that: there are always multiple ways to perceive the same entity.
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LOL. I think you have not been paying a lot of attention to recent developments and trends in the west (such as BREXIT and AMERICA FIRST) towards more self-governance, independence, nationalism and separation from global entities like the EU, NATO and UN.
The UN is a dead end. There will never be global CENTRALIZED governance. Federalism and local self-governance and independence within a VOLUNTARY UNION is the only way humans will cooperate successfully. You should read some Milton Friedman. Only system based on voluntary participation are sustainable because they are based on mutual benefit. The second you put a gun to someones head and start dictating the terms of service from your "ivory tower" (idiom) like the UN or NATO does, then you immediately run into human's natural desire for freedom.
Anyways, Good Luck.
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