New concept grocery store
Have You hear about Amazon new concept grocery store. They want open a full intelligent shop . You can take Your mobile device which connected via app with shopper Amazon account and go to shopping . There is no in line , no held up by slow costumers, no waiting for a charge. Just go to shop take a product You want to eat or use and that's it . You can easily leave shop and don't worry about anything else. If you can not believe and wanna see put this word : " Amazon Go" to search engine .They test first shop in company's hometown . I think this is the future of real shopping , you can easily buy what do you want not being nervous by other customers or seller and save some time. You don't need money when you're hungry unless mobile phone and maybe this shops are open 24 hours / 7 days per week.
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New concept grocery store
Have you heard about Amazon's new concept grocery store? They want to open a full intelligent "smart shop." You can take your mobile device which connected via app with shopper to your Amazon account and go to shopping . There is no in line, no held hold up by slow costumers, no waiting for a charge to go through. Just go to shop take a product you want to eat or use and that's it. You can easily leave the shop and don't not worry about anything else. If you can not believe and wanna want to see*, put this word the words: " Amazon Go" to in a search engine. They are testing the first shop in the company's hometown. I think this is the future of real shopping, you can easily buy what do you want not being nervous by other customers or seller ** and save some time. You don't need money when you're hungry unless *** mobile phone and maybe this shops are this shop is**** open 24 hours a day/7 days per a week.--------
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Notes:
Usually we don't capitalize "you" in the middle of a sentence. I changed all of those
Also, usually you should put a space after a comma or period, but not before the punctuation mark.
* You can say "wanna," but you should almost never write it. Write out "want to." (same with "gonna" and "going to")
** I'm not sure what you mean by the part in blue.
*** There seems to be something missing this sentence. What are you trying to say about your mobile phone?
**** This can either be "this shop is" if you are talking about the one store in Seattle or "these shops are" if you are talking about all stores like this. I'm also not sure what you're trying to say about the shop's hours.
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Have You hear about Amazon new concept grocery store. I would suggest this, because there are the Amazon Region, Amazon Brazilian,and Amazon River, only to let it clearer: Have you heard ofAmazon Company's new grocery store concept?
...You want to consume or use and that's it .
... You don't need money when you're hungry only your mobile phone and maybe the shops will be open 24/7.
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New concept grocery store
Have You heard about Amazon's new concept for their grocery store. They want open a full intelligent (?. What do you mean by intelligent) shop . You can use Your mobile device whichis connected to amazon via app and access your account and do shopping . There is no online option , no need to be held up by slow costumers, no waiting for a charge. Just shop choose the product you'd like to eat and that's it . You can easily leave the shop and not worry about anything else. If you can not /don't believe me/this and wanna see for yourself, type this phrase : " Amazon Go" into the search engine .They find the closestshop in your hometown . I think this is the future of real shopping , you can easily buy what you want, not be nervous by other customers or sellers and save some time. You don't need money when you're hungry, just yourmobile phone and maybe rheir shops are open 24 hours/ 7 days per week.Want to progress faster?
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