Practising collocations.
One day Anne thought she was mature enough to set up her own business. She had done many courses that broaden her scope for working , but she needed the money to put the wheel into motion with her company. At that moment she had some financial problems , but the city council wanted to support new business so Anne took the chance and made her project. She was awarded with a grant so, after breaking the news to her family and friends ,started her new adventure.
During a year she did the best she could, but then she realized she needed more staff to improve her company so she came to the decision of looking a partner. Anne interviewed a lot of people and finally thought she had found the right person . He gave her the impression of being an honest person and be able to do his best for the company, but she made a big mistake and paid the price for this bad decision losing her company.
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Practising collocations.
One day Anne thought she was mature enough to set up her own business. She had done many courses to broaden her scope for working , but she needed the money to put the wheels into motion with her company. At that moment she had some financial problems , but the city council wanted to support new business so Anne took the chance and made her project. She was awarded a grant so, after breaking the news to her family and friends ,started her new adventure.For a year she did her best, but then she realized she needed more staff to improve her company so she decided to look for a partner. Anne interviewed a lot of people and finally thought she had found the right person . He impressed her as being honest and of doing his best for the company, but she made a big mistake by partnering him and paid the price by losing her company.
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