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IELTS task2 practice! /*this is my practice of IELTS writing task 2. If you could correct me or give me advise it would be a great help for me.*/ Write about the following topic: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Answer: It is said that researchers that the natural characteristics affect on us more than the experiences we had been through. In my point of view, I believe that the incident happened in our life may have more impact on us. First of all, it is true that everything occurring in our life has more or less influence on us after we are born. The moment we came on Earth is when we started to receive information. It is also a lot of researchers who had pointed that the environment plays a big role of forming our personalities. For example, there is a ancient Chinese story that a mother switched the place three times so as to find a great environment for her child to study. In the end of the story, they lived nearby a school which her child could learn even better than other location they had stayed. On the other hand, I think the most of characteristics we have naturally couldn't have a deeper influence on our mind. If somebody having a beautiful face and fit body may have more confident trait, but when he or she is getting old ,the confidence of a person may disappear. It is because this personality doesn't forming from inside. For instance, a low self-esteem disable person may find the value if himself and became more happy and confident by working harder or accomplishing a big task. In brief, I think the most trait of a person depending on important things of his life rather than the nature.

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