some words burst in my brain
1.Hard working doesn`t always promise us to succeed,let alone taking it easy.
2.If you are desired to the best, you will certainly run into the hardest.
3. You will not die as long as not fleeing away.
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some words burst in my brain
1.Hard work doesn't always guarantee success, let alone a break.2.If you desire to be the best, you will certainly run the hardest.
3. You will not die as long as you stand your ground.
Very well written!
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some words burst are exploding in my brain
1.Hard working doesn't always promise us to succeed guarantee success ,let alone taking it easy.2.If you are desired to the want to do your best, you will certainly run into the try (or work) hardest.
3. You will not die as long as not fleeing or fade away. (I wasn't sure what you wanted to say here)
*Great job! Although hard work doesn't always guarantee success, it certainly helps a lot. :)
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