#9 Gardening
I had a wish that I have a beautiful garden with lots of beautiful flowers and trees. But I never had a garden while I lived in Seoul. After moving here, in Jeju, I had a space for gardening. N is always taking care of that by herself.
Yesterday and today, we plucked grass in the garden. The wind was so fresh, little bit cold though. I listened to music and talked with N. I didn't had enough energy to care of garden and housechores perfectly. But these days I feel very comfortable and peaceful. So I could concentreate on real life more. I am expecting spring time. I am going to stay much time in my garden with warm heart. :)
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#9 Gardening
I had a wish that I have (had) a beautiful garden with lots of beautiful flowers and trees. But I never had a garden while I lived in Seoul. After moving here, in (to) Jeju, I had a space for gardening. N is always taking care of that by herself.Yesterday and today, we plucked (picked) grass in the garden. The wind was so fresh, (a) little bit cold though. I listened to music and talked with N. I didn't had (have. You can use have here, because 'didn't' takes up the past form, rather than the verb 'to have') enough energy to care of (the) garden and housechores (housework) perfectly. But these days I feel very comfortable and peaceful. So I could (can) concentreate (concentrate) on real life more (careful of your phrasing here, what do you mean by 'real life'? Nothing suggests that you were concentrating on an artificial life) . I am expecting (looking forward to) spring time. I am going to stay (spend) much time in my garden with warm heart. (in the warmth, or in the warm weather) :)
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