My life story, Part 25
When I started to work there, I found myself in an apartment alone with neither colleagues nor costumers. I started to get scared. There were many clothes to be sold there. I wondered what it has to do with aviculture.
The boss made a visit in the morning and left and I was alone for the rest of the day. No one came or called. Several days passed like this. There were some books and I made myself busy reading them since I had nothing else to do.
One day, the doorbell rang and a young beautiful woman came and asked me for the money, which my boss owed her, but my boss had not, tell me anything about it. I asked her to come back tomorrow so I can clear the matter with my boss. He asked me about her name, which I did not know. So he told me that the next time you see her, ask her name, phone number and address and give her the money.
She came back the next morning and I did as my boss told me. She gave me her name, phone number and address and I gave her the mentioned money. I was so happy that I finally did something in my new job. But when I told the boss the name and properties of her, He got really mad and told me I didn’t owe such person any money, so call her number immediately. I did, but soon I found that the number belonged to someone else and she had given me a fake name and number.
I was so upset and didn’t know what to do. When I arrived in the dorm, my father asked me, what is the matter with you? And I explained all what happened to my dad. My father told me to stop being sad and gave me the money and told me to give the money to your boss.
The next morning, when my boss arrived in office, I gave him the money and told him, I couldn’t work there anymore, but he returned the money to me and told me you’re still young and a rookie in the business. You should know that not everybody is honest.
I decided not to stay there anymore. But I had to be there until they could find a new secretory.
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My life story, Part 25
When I started to work there, I found myself in an apartment alone with neither colleagues nor costumers. I started to get scared. There were many clothes to be sold there. I wondered what it has had to do with aviculture.The boss made a visit [you could say 'paid a visit' or simply 'visited' in lieu of 'made a visit'] in the morning and left and I was alone for the rest of the day. No one came or called. Several days passed like this. There were some books and I made myself busy reading them since I had nothing else to do. [I might revise this to 'There were some books to keep my occupied since I had nothing else to do.']
One day, the doorbell rang and a young beautiful young woman came and asked me for the money, which that my boss owed her, but my boss had not, tell told me anything about it. I asked her to come back tomorrow the next day so I can could clear the matter with my boss. He asked me about her name, which I did not know. So he told me that the next time you see her, to ask her name, phone number and address the next time I saw her and to give her the money.
She came back the next morning and I did as my boss had told me. She gave me her name, phone number and address and I gave her the mentioned money [I'd either change to 'the aforementioned money' or just 'I gave her the money]. I was so happy that I finally did something in at my new job. But when I told gave the boss the her name and properties of her information, he got really mad and told me I didn’t owe such person any money, so I should call her number immediately. I did, but soon I soon found that the number belonged to someone else and she had given me a fake name and number.
I was so upset and didn’t know what to do. When I arrived in the dorm, my father asked me, 'what is the matter with you?' And I explained all what happened to my dad [I'd delete that because it makes it sound like something happened to your dad as opposed to something happened that you told your dad about]. My father told me to stop being sad and [I might revise to simply 'gave me sufficient money to repay my boss'] gave me the money and told me to give the money to your boss.
The next morning, when my boss arrived in office, I gave him the money and told him, that I couldn’t work there anymore, but he returned the money to me and told me said 'you’re still young and a rookie in the business. You should know that not everybody is honest.'
I decided not to stay there anymore [I'd revise to 'I decided to leave anyway'.] But I had to be there remain until they could find a new secretory.
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