Report on our Street Festival
I was trying to use "generalising language"
The festival has taken place in the city center at the main square. It has been held for the last ten years. By the way, it always was very successful attending people of all ages. Especially children love the festival. Chiefly the majority of audience were families with children.
They enjoyed performances of singers, dancers, jugglers, puppeteers, comedians and so on. The festival included different perfomances created not only by local groups but also by international performers. In other words it had a piece of interest for the various ethnic groups in our community.
It is difficult to help saying that the highlight of the festival was the special event - the long hoped-for performance by a famous US singer. This event promotion started in advance in newspaper ads, radio spots, leaflets, posters and so on. In fact, a promotion was at the highest level so, thousands of people saw the advertisments. Also, the sponsors were pleased with low charges for all types of advertising.
In general, refreshments were satisfactory and people were satisfied with the quality of the food and service.
The festival gave great pleasure to a large number of people and they hope to visit this festival in next year again.
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Report on our Street Festival
I was trying to use "generalising language"The festival has taken place in the city center at the main square. It has been held for the last ten years. By the way, it was always very successful through attending people of all ages. Especially children who love the festival. Chiefly the majority of audience were families with children.
They enjoyed performances of singers, dancers, jugglers, puppeteers, comedians and so on. The festival included different perfomances created not only by local groups but also by international performers. In other words it gripped the attention a piece of interest for of the various ethnic groups in our community.
It is difficult to help saying that the highlight of the festival was the special event - the long hoped-for performance by a famous US singer. This event promotion started in advance in newspaper ads, radio spots, leaflets, posters and so on. In fact, a promotion was at the highest level so, thousands of people saw the advertisments. Also, the sponsors were pleased with low charges for all types of advertising.
In general, refreshments were satisfactory (delicious )and people were satisfied with the quality of the food and service.
The festival gave great pleasure to a large number of people and they hope to visit this festival in the next year again.
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