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殷之翎
Sometimes I Am Tired of My Brother Mostly I love his humor which makes our conversations lively. Once in a while,he is a reliable brother,who always protects me against any bully. I like when he behaves like a countable brother,but he sometimes acts like a child. Saying inappropriate words,Acting indecently,and leaving immature messages on Facebook all drives me angry. However,anger doesn't last long every time when I recall how angry he was upon hearing I was isolated in junior high school. I still love him very much. If he weren't an asshole sometimes,I would love him much more.

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Sometimes I Am Tired of My Brother

Mostly I love his humour which makes our conversations lively.
Once in a while (Every so often?), he is a reliable brother, who always protects me against any bully.
I like it when he behaves like a countable dependable brother, but he sometimes acts like a child.
Saying inappropriate words, acting indecently inappropriately and leaving immature messages on Facebook all drives makes me angry.
However the anger doesn't last long every time when I recall how angry he was upon hearing when he heard I was isolated in junior high school.
I still love him very much.
If he weren't an asshole sometimes, I would love him much more.


Good effort!

Best, Rupert

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