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My fourth note Today I want to write about e-shopping. In my opinion, it is one the best and comfortable inventions in the internet. Maybe the best one is Wikipedia. And social networks are also more important. But e-shopping is also on the top of my imaginable chart. It is amazing what you don’t need to go somewhere to looking for something. You don’t need to spend your free time for traditional shopping. And one of the main reasons to choose e-shopping for me is a global character of it. I can buy something anywhere. I can observe all the world to find goods what I need in 10 minutes. My favorite website for e-shopping is aliexpress.com. I have bought a lot of cheap things there. And a good luck was in my side. All my purchases were nice and had a good quality. But I know a lot of examples from my friends when their buys were not so successful. So e-shopping seems to me like a big lottery.

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My fourth note

Today I want to write about e-shopping.

In my opinion, it is one the best and comfortable inventions in  on the internet. Maybe the best one is Wikipedia, and social networks are also more important. But e-shopping is also on at the top of my imaginable chart list. (" **** is at the top of my list" is a very common saying in english, the word chart while technically correct simply would not be used because a chart is something usually used when giving a presentation of some kind)

It is amazing what that you don’t need to go somewhere to looking for something, and You don’t need to spend your free time for traditional shopping. And one of the main reasons to choose e-shopping for me is a global character (character would be used if something had a personality, try and find a different word here) of it. I can buy something anywhere. I can observe (search or look) all over the world to find goods what that I need in 10 minutes.

My favorite website for e-shopping is aliexpress.com. I have bought a lot of cheap things there. And good luck was in on my side. All my purchases were nice (while nice can be used here, try and think of a different word so it sounds better)  and had a were good quality. But I know a lot of examples from my friends when their buys were not so successful. (But i know of many times where my friends bought things and were not so successful "or perhaps you could say lucky" would sound better) 

So e-shopping seems to me to be like a big lottery.

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