[picture six]
Would you mind correcting my sentences? And if you were me, how would you go about describing these pictures?
I hope that my descriptions of these pictures give you a good idea of what they look like.
[Picture six]
This picture shows a glossary store or a convenience store in somewhere.
I see two men and a woman in sweets area.
One man is taking a candy in his breast.the candy is covered a yellow package.It seems to be a chocolate.
The other people are not looking at what he is doing ,because they are looking back.
The picture notice the scene of the shoplifting.
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[picture six]
Would you mind correcting my sentences? And if you were me, how would you go about describing these pictures?I hope that my descriptions of these pictures give you a good idea of what they look like.
[Picture six]
This picture shows a glossary grocery? store or a convenience store in somewhere.
I see two men and a woman in the sweets area.
One man is taking a candy in his breast.* The candy is covered in a yellow packaging. It seems to be a chocolate (candy).
The other people are not looking at what he is doing, because they are looking back.
The picture illustrates a shoplifting scene.
*This sentence sounds a bit odd. I picture a man putting a candy behind his clothing after taking it from the rack in order to hide it.
How I would describe the picture:
This picture shows either a grocery or a convenience store somewhere. I can see two men and a woman in the sweets area. One man is taking a candy on his chest. The candy is covered in a yellow packaging. It seems to be a chocolate candy. Other people are not looking at what he is doing because they are looking back. This picture illustrates a shoplifting scene. (A shoplifting scene can be noticed on the picture)
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[picture six]
Would you mind correcting my sentences? And if you were me, how would you go about describing these pictures?I hope that my descriptions of these pictures give you a good idea of what they look like.
[Picture six]
This picture shows a glossary store or a convenience store in somewhere.
I see two men and a woman in the sweets (you could also say "candy") area (you could also say section).
One man is taking (you could say placing or putting) a candy in his breast (you could say he is taking a candy and placing it in his breast pocket, or slipping it into his pocket or jacket (if he's wearing one). the candy is covered (with or in) a yellow package. It seems to be a chocolate.
The other people are not looking at what he is doing ,because they are looking back.
The picture notice the depicts a scene of the shoplifting. (depict is the proper word when describing an unseen photo or video)
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