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Bought in the sales
Today, I would like to make a short reflective contribution for the sake of the sales.The sales, this terrible time when people madden and they are encouraged by the power of advertising... There are people who are saving all year round in order to spend their money and savings on purchasing unnecessary things such as: clothing, utensils, books... that probably they don´t need.
From my point of view, advertising plays a great role in this compulsive shopping. The publicity relies on powerful tools to get positive result. In addition, I think that all in this world is thought, from the quality of product to consumer characteristics.
I am not against the sales, however I consider that we must be prudent and we must purchase only what we need.
Sometimes we are seized by brands, trends, designers without thinking about we may be being deceived. So, I believe that it could be better getting a discount in a book, for example, than the media power of the sales, which it can manage to lose our control on acquiring objects that we don´t use after. In this way, we must thin
Today I would like to make a short reflection with regard to sales. The sales are terrible occasions when people go mad and are lead astray by the power of advertising. Some people save for a whole year in order to spend all their money and savings on unnecessary things that probably they don't need, such as clothing, utensils and books. My point of view is that advertising plays a great role in encouraging this compulsive shopping. This publicity uses powerful tools to get positive results for the advertisers. In addition, I think that all in this world is thought, from the quality of product to consumer characteristics (no puedo entender esta línea). I am not against sales, but I think we need to be prudent and we must only purchase what we need. Sometimes we are lured by brands or trends or designers and we do not think that perhaps we are being deceived. Therefore I believe that maybe it would be better to search for discounts in a book, for example, rather than to simply rely on what the media says to us, as they simply encourage us to purchase objects that we don't really need. In this way we must think for ourselves
Hola Nana, buen trabajo, la tema es bastante difícil.
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