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殷之翎
When I Wait My Dad to Drive Me Home After School Taiwan is in a chilly start of spring with wind blowing mercilessly in my city. I wore shorts,shivering like a little grass in crazy wind. It was too cold to bear,and I thought I would become a popsicle before my dad finally came. So I started to count the cars passing through me to distract myself. 1,2,3,4,.....,13...oh!BMW!...14,15...... My dad's favorite car brand is LEXUS,so I stopped for a few seconds when I saw a white LEXUS car. I remembered that my brother promised to buy one for dad. At that time,everyone doubted that if he was joking,while my dad smiled. He always gets satisfied easily.Even a unreliable promise made him happy. But he also gets upset easily when I or my brother was in predicament. He wants desperately to be a super father,not knowing that he has already been. In freezing wind I counted to 60,and saw a familiar TOYOTA driving hastily to me. Daddy,I love you.I said in my mind. It's my first writing.So there may be lots of mistakes,and I hope that you help me correct my sentences or words. Thank you!

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