Short text just to learn some phrasal verbs. Could anyone, please, check out my mistakes? Thank you.

I agree! but sun makes me happier. Nice write up!

Short text just to learn some phrasal verbs. Could anyone, please, check out my mistakes? Thank you.

Which What is your favorite kind of weather? (which is mainly used if you have a smaller choice of 2 or 3 things  What is better here because there are endless different types of weather to choose from)
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It is hard to say which kind of weather is to my liking. of my choice. From On the one hand, I like spring days when it starts to warm up and the sky, which has been cloudy clouded over(the verb 'to cloud over' describes the process of the clouds coming and the weather changing from sunny to cloudy.  This can only happen once at the start of winter.  To describe the whole winter it is better just to use the adjective 'cloudy') during the whole winter, begins to brighten up. I also love the summer with its sun beating down through clear blue skies.

However, the rainy weather is my most preferred preferable kind. I would rather say the Specifically those stormy, rainy days, when a strong wind blows down leaves and twigs from trees. They are my favorite days ones. I love these days because of the rain that pours down all day long. To For me, it is the perfect chance to stay at home and spend a lovely relaxing day reading an interesting but long-delayed book which I have been meaning to read for some time. It seems to be an excellent excuse to postpone all urgent matters and just wait when until the storm will dies down (we usually use present tense after until. Also 'dies down' is a much better phrase than 'dies away'. This is the specific phrase we use for storms in particular)away and the weather will clears up.(great phrasal verb, here we don't use future tense after until)