Happy Valentine's Day!
Can you correct my sentences and make it sound more natural, please?
Happy Valentine's Day! I made cookies for my family. I wonder what the shape of cookies are called in English.
My family is looking forward to eating them right up. I'm delighted to see their smile.
Later today I'll give one to each of Rion's and Airi's friends. May the world be filled with love...Much Love.
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Happy Valentine's Day!
Can you correct my sentences and make it sound more natural, please?Happy Valentine's Day! I made cookies for my family and I wonder what the shape of cookies are called in English.
My family is looking forward to eating them. right up. I'm delighted to see their m smile.
Later, today* I'll give one to each of Rion's and Airi's friends. May the world be filled with love...Much Love.
* It makes more since to use one word than the two together. Later or Today
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Nicole
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Happy Valentine's Day!
Can you correct my sentences and make it sound more natural, please?Happy Valentine's Day! I made cookies for my family. I wonder how the shapes of cookies are called in English.
My family is looking forward to eating them right now. I'm delighted to see their smile.
Later today I'll give one to each of Rion's and Airi's friends. May the world be filled with love... Much Love.
Good wish.
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