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1. As I said earlier, I have been starting to learn English again five weeks ago but the last week wasn't very productive. I was going to write three little essays in English but only finished one of them. I was speaking to my friend in English some days ago when suddenly my mother came in my room and I couldn't concentrate after that, and, as a result, the dialog was so odd and stupid. I tried to show interest in topics we talked about but I failed. I was reading a book in English when my another friend called me, and, of course, I didn't start reading again after talking. I really want to be skilled in English so I should undertake responsibility in the learning process to achieve my goal. I must to do it.
2. Today i woke up in bad mod. I work in the center of Moscow. I’m looking at the window and see corner of the Moscow City Hall. That is the red building which was build in the end of 19th century. It’s snowing. White powder covering Moscow wthite soft blanket.
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Just a New Note
1. As I said earlier, I have been started to learn English again five weeks ago but the last week wasn't very productive. I was going to write three little essays in English but only finished one of them. I was speaking to my friend in English some days ago when suddenly my mother came in my room and I couldn't concentrate after that, and, as a result, the dialog was so odd and stupid. I tried to show interest in topics we talked about but I failed. I was reading a book in English when my another friend called me, and, of course, I didn't start reading again after talking. I really want to be skilled in English so I should undertake responsibility in the learning process to achieve my goal. I must to do it.
2. Today I woke up in bad mood. I work in the centre of Moscow. I’m looking at out the window and see the corner of the Moscow City Hall. That is the red building which was built in at the end of 19th century. It’s snowing. White powder is covering Moscow with a soft wthite soft blanket.
This is good, Yuliya. "I have been starting to learn" is messy. "center" is the American spelling, the English spelling is "centre". "soft white" is a more natural word order.
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Thank you for your advice Branuka :)
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Just a New Note
1. As I said earlier, I started to learn English again five weeks ago but the last week wasn't very productive. I was going to write three little essays in English but only finished one of them. I was speaking to my friend in English some days ago when my mother burst into my room and I couldn't concentrate after that, and, as a result, the dialog was clumsy and stupid. I tried to show an interest in what we talked about but failed. I was reading a book in English when another friend called me, and, of course, I didn't resume the book after talking. I really want to be skilled in English so I should be more strict with myself to achieve my goal. I must do it.2. Today i woke up in a bad mood. I work in the center of Moscow. Looking out my window I can see the corner of Moscow City Hall. That is the red building built in the end of 19th century. It’s snowing. White powder covers Moscow with a soft blanket.
Very well written!
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You will be fluent in English.Practise as much as you can.Try to watch English movies and watch some English conversations in youtube.
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