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english writing ,12 february 2017 today is sunday the wheter is good outside sunly, i got up at eleven then i had breakfast ,i watched t.v. my weekend was well,lastnigth i watched a movie called "passangers" this movies tells a story about people are traveling in a spaceship ,these people are sleeping along of all journey but something bad happen and one person wakes,he opens his eyes and get out the capsule where he was sleeping and begining to walk by the spaceship he didn't saw anyone so he went to look for information of what had happened,he found the problem his capsule was damage for that reason he woke and still the journey will finish with in ninety years,he felt really bad and alone. he start thinking of how the life would be in that ship. i enjoyed movie ,i think was a good movie ,hope to keep improving my english,i would like fixing my mistakes and grammar

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spaceship. He didn't saw see anyone so he went to look for information about  of what had happened. He found the problem - his capsule was damaged. For that reason he woke up and still the journey will finish will not finish for another with in ninety years. He felt really bad and alone.
He starts thinking of how the life would be in that ship.
I enjoyed the movie. I think it was a good movie. Ihope to keep improving my English. I would like to fix fixing my mistakes and grammar.


Hi Joaquin, I'm glad that you like the movie. I haven't seen it yet, but I want to.

For grammar, remember to capitalize "I" and days of the week (ex: Sunday). Also make sure to not write in run-on sentences. This is very bad writing style in English. Keep practicing! Good job!

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English writing ,12 february 2017 February 12, 2017 (in USA, this is how you write the dates)

Today is Sunday and the wheter weather is good outside. It is sunn. I got up at eleven and then I had breakfast. I also watched t.v. TV.

My weekend was good. well. Last night, I watched a movie called "Passengers." This movies tells a story about people that are traveling in a spaceship. These people are sleeping during the journey, sleeping along of all journey but something bad happens and one person wakes up. He opens his eyes and gets out the capsule where he was sleeping and begins begining to walk around by the

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English writing ,12 February 2017

Today is Sunday, the weather is good outside, it is sunny. I got up at eleven then I had breakfast, I watched t.v.

My weekend was good, last night I watched a movie called "Passengers." This movies tells a story about people who are traveling in a spaceship. These people are sleeping during the journey but something bad happens and one person wakes up, he opens his eyes and gets out of the capsule where he was sleeping and begins to walk along the spaceship. He didn't see anyone so he went to look for information about what had happened. He found the problem, his capsule was damaged, for that reason he woke up and the journey will continue for ninety years. He felt really bad and alone.
He started thinking about how life would be in that ship.
I enjoyed the movie, I think it was a good movie. I hope to keep improving my English, I would like help fixing my mistakes and grammar.
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Hi Joaquin, this is my first visit to italki. I am a native English speaker. Would you like some help with what you wrote? I think it's great that you're practicing writing! My name is Catherine, I want to practice my Portuguese and Spanish. I corrected your essay and I hope it helps. Keep writing every day and you'll learn quickly!

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